You should, too.
Fortunately, he’s gotten rid of the dreadful British/scientific style punctuation the manuscript sported. Or, rather, his copyeditor has.
I hadn’t remembered quite so much science in the first chapter, but a bit of that is to be expected, and I know there’s a lot of juicy stuff about sex later on. The volume could, however, use more dialogue. Or perhaps a dismembered corpse: you can never go wrong with dead bodies.
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